Тер-Сагателов Юрий
10 класс
МОУ "Гимназия г.Раменское"
учитель Гусева Людмила Владимировна

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“Mom” is the first children’s word –
The loveliest I’ve ever heard.
My Mom is the best of all moms in the world.
Her face is as full of beauty as of grace –
The face of pleasure and of smiles.
In the darkness it gives me the light,
When I see it, enjoys my eyesight.
I have a joy that has no other
With a lovely woman, with my Mother.
Mommy, I love you more than you see.
You are always there where I need you to be.
You are a part of my heart and will always be.
I want to see you in my life forever.
My Mom, we will be always together.
Mom, you are above all the rest.
For me you are just the best!

I liked your poem. Such sincere and touching words fascinated me:
Mommy, I love you more than you see.
You are always there where I need you to be.
You are a part of my heart and will always be.
All the best in the contest! Good luck!

That was first class work!
Good luck in the contest!

Dea Yuriy!
Men are often chary of words of love, especially to their mothers.
In this sense your poem is perfect!
Please be always so loving and affectionate son!
Let your friends follow your example, in this case all moms will be happy!
I wish you success in the contest!

P.S. My congratulations to your English teacher!

It's the best job. It's vera ples\asant to read such words. Best wishes!!!

Your poem is exciting! Good luck!