Петрова Полина
10 класс
АОУ школа №10
г.Долгопрудный, Московская область
учитель Азарова Ольга Николаевна

Mother gives you the first day,
Mother gives you the first touch.
Mother is your first love.
Mother presents you a nice life.

She’s been with you
Since before your birth.
She’ll stand by you,
While you’ll be on the Earth.

She thinks of you
From day to night
She always supports you
If you’re wrong or right.

She can give you
A piece of advice,
Takes care of you and
Cheer up you at once.


Mother is fun to be around.
Mother never let you down
Mother is a trustworthy friend.
She has a lot of wise to spend.


With pleasure, follow her advice.
She is the sun and bright star in your life….

You're doing beautifully! Do follow my advice: take care of your mother, because she is the best woman in the world.

It's so nice you've created such words devoted to your mother:"She is the sun and bright star in your life" Best wishes!

I think you are brilliant daughter and don't forget that your mother " always supports you
If you’re wrong or right".
Best wishes.

Thank you very much.

I like your poem for sincerity and love to your Mother which exudes every line!
Well done!

P.S. I am absolutely sure that in the future you will be an excellent mother, and your children will write the same beautiful words for you!
This is the meaning of this competition in particular and life in general!

Thank you very much.I am glad to hear it.