Воробец Богдан
6 класс
МОУ "СОШ п.Горный Краснопартизанский район Саратовской области"
Учитель Дмитриева Татьяна Геннадьевна


Переделанный вариант

I love my mother

My mother is very nice.
She is not ice.
I am her son.
She is my sun.

My mother is not a house wife,
She is smart and fine.
She is my rose,
I kiss her nose.

My mother has pure soul.
She is my flower.
She likes to sew.
It is cool so.

Mother, my dear,
Tell me a fairy-tail.
You are tired today.
I am with you again.

My dear, dear mummy,
I love you very much!
I am very glad.
I am not sad.

I miss my mother.
I kiss my mother.
I love her too.
And what about you?

Ты написал великолепное стихотворение!

Здравствуйте!
Примите пожалуйста мое стихотворение, постарался все переделать.

I love my mother

My mother is very nice.
She is not ice.
I am her son.
She is my sun.

My mother is not a house wife,
She is smart and fine.
She is my rose,
I kiss her nose.

My mother has pure soul.
She is my flower.
She likes to sew.
It is cool so.

Mother, my dear,
Tell me a fairy-tail.
You are tired today.
I am with you again.


My dear, dear mummy,
I love you very much!
I am very glad.
I am not sad.

I miss my mother.
I kiss my mother.
I love her too.
And what about you?

Your poem is really nice!
I wish you success in this contest.

Your poem is very nice! Good luck!