Титова Елизавета
класс 7
МОУ-СОШ №17
город Клин, Московская область
учитель Гатовская Диана Алексеевна

Mother’s Love

Mother’s love is like a song
That goes on and on forever!
Mother’s love lasts so long
And doesn’t finish never!

Mother’s love is like an ocean
That goes down so deep!
Mother’s love is like a rose
Whose beauty I want to keep!

Mother’s love is like a river
That will never end!
Mother’s love is like a dove
With a beautiful message to send!

Mother’s love is like a sun
That shines in my sky every day!
Mother’s love is like a gun
That defends me anyway!

Mother’s love is like a song
That goes on and on forever!
Mother’s love lasts so long
And doesn’t finish never!

What a sweet poem you've written! That's cool! Good luck!

You compared your mother's love with a song, a river, an ocean, a sun. You've found so tender and nice words to describe your mother! Take care of her!

Your poetical verses about your mother’s love are full of great feelings and imagination. Good luck!

Your poem is bright! Good luck!

Your poem is very sincere. You use the interesting comparisons for mother's love. Best wishes!

What a touching poem! You have used so many nice comparisons to describe your mother's love and in your short poem you were able to show all your warm feelings to your mother. I like your poem very much! Good luck!